This is one of the more unique Frantic Factory remixes I've heard. All the great ones capture the sadistic creepiness of the factory masked by industrialism and walking toys. Rock versions rarely are able to do that, but yours is a key exception. It isn't on par with your other one, simply because rock and this track don't really intertwine perfectly, but it's very listenable and probably does capture the industrial, "frantic" aspect of the level better than other remixes. No doubt you were influenced by the machine room version of this theme when remixing this.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.