A couple of tweaks

Very good start! loving the drums at work here. However a word of wisdom, as a DnB promoter i would say that this is not were the DnB scene is at right now, its all about jump up and liquid. I know you said this was liquid but actuall synths you put in are too sharp and dated for current liquid drum and bass. No offence just construct criticism :)
Well done though for your first track ! :D

I like this, a lot.

Keep it up. You definitely have potential, I'd love for you to give me some criticism on some of my work sometime, if you don't mind.

Niiice.

You're good at liquid DnB.