Its a good start
The song is pretty good once it gets going but its a really slow starter. I really had to push myself to listen through to the end but I was pleased at the end. At least the first minute needs more variance even if it is slight. And you were right, there is a personality, it just isnt outgoing enough yet. Keep working and making more songs!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.