I am sorry, but if you want critique, you got it.
Not only is it repetitive, but it makes use of very short/staccato notes and nothing but. I will also mention that there is way too much melody and nothing else.
More background synths/pads, beats, instruments. Anything to fill it with something other than the melody would make it a little better. Also, I suggest that that you continue the pattern of using diverse background effect patterns, I enjoyed that.