This is BEAST! <3 I love this!
I dont really see why you're so unhappy with this song, its actually really catchy! the only thing i'd watch is the volume mastering, like starting at 1:06, the backround arp could of been.. Not as loud. But the part after that was good!
Just watch out for that kind of stuff yano? Maybe find some good tutorials on mastering and whatnot. :)
Other then that, the song was really original and uplifting! Really enjoyed it actually xD Definitely heard worst xD
Ps: i voted a 3.. Meant to go for a 4 :s... Hope the "10" makes up for it :')
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