very sample but cO.ol!
I loved the end where you actually remixed it into a techno sound; however, the first two minutes really hurt this song. I can't quite place what you were doing... maybe using an echo filter, but it didn't sound good at all. I almost had to stop listening. If you drop the first two minutes, this actually ends up being a pretty good attempt.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.