Huh... Neat track!
I don't understand the low score provided here. The mix seems fairly respectable, to me. It has a lot of neat variation, a relatively clean mix (although the chords starting at 1:10 seem to take a little too much room int he soundscape, there), and the track is soft spoken enough where it won't intrude on anyone's listening habits.
I do recommend variation from the harmonic pattern more often - even the novice listener will notice that pattern repeating for so long.
Not bad at all - sorry you became victim to a zero-bomb. I liked it quite a bit (and find myself liking it more and more the longer it plays).