I like the song, my favorite part is at 1:40. It is sorta repeative but thats ok, it didnt bug me, overall nice job 4\5
u need variations to your melody
that's music talk that is. If you dunno what a variation is (though I'm sure you do) means changeing the melody slightly, no the bass but the melody, get what I mean? If you do that, I'll give you top marks but I won't vote on it just yet.
Thanks for feedback ;]
Yes,I'm still practising,my style is changing.
Nice overall, but gets repetitious
I like the melody, it's pretty funky and catchy. However, it's repeated a lot, and loses it's edge after a while. Great build up of intensity throughout the song, keep my interest. However, I think if you put in another melody, and switched up the one you have now, it would turn this piece into some very, very nice trance.
For a new person making trance, this is nice stuff. Keep at it, I look forward to hearing more of your stuff.
Thanks a lot =D I've got 'bout 21 songs as projects and can't decide which to submit :P I'm listening them over and over to knockout the worst.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.