The samples are weak
try to make something more unique instead of using standard samples, compress them, equalize them, add some reverb or something. there are countless possibilities.
anyway the strings in the beginning are great if you would have used it more maybe slicing it to peaces and rearranging it with an drum & bass beat would be great
be creative :D
Yeah I'm thinking I might go back and try that since the strings never come back in the rest of the song.
Thanks for the review by the way.