It has some potential
Would be better if you alter the beat or the melody on parts because it becomes boring after a short time. and there's an immense lack of bass not the kick it's just missing a baseline. the few at the end doesn't really fit in my opinion.
now to the good things ;)
I like the synths you used. the one that sounds like a truck running into you is very cool.
So over all. make it less repetetive add some serious base and alter the beat and this could be quite good ;)
Hmm... yeh the bass doesn't start before 4:05. I could have added some bass for the part before the "breakdown", if you can call it that.
I dunno, I tried to make somekind of progressive trance, imo they feel all a bit repetitive. About the melody, I tried to switch with the melodies every now and then, when it felt fitting =].
It really has a unique feel to it. In my opinion, it dragged on a lot, especially in the beginning. This song has a tendency to just play the same 4 measures over and over, but you do satisfy the listener eventually with something new and fresh.
Overall its a really good piece, keep up the good work :D
thank you =]