I agree with steven-lee
A bass is definitely needed in certain spots, for example @ around 30 seconds. It sounds a little empty there. I really appreciate all the breaks in it, but some sound effects and filters would serve this song well. It's a little too flat. Lastly I'd remove the sound effect at the end and just finish the track with the drums there. It's too sudden and too different from everything that came before.
Overall I like this track, especially the piano melody.
After all your cool reviews, I feel bad to only give you a 7, but I try to be as honest as possible here and give you some advice, because this has a lot of potential.
I don't know whether this is FL studio or not, if it is, I assume its capabilities are rather limited (I don't know much about it, never used it^^).
I think you should absolutely keep on making music, because the talent is there. As long as you keep working and experimenting, all you'll need in the future will be some better software.
All the best.
I see what you're saying. Oh, don't feel bad about giving me a 7. Totally understand. This review means a lot coming from you! Thanks Martin!
Melody and everything's there, Though as a tip i'd recommend you use "Filter Cutoffs" and reeverb on the keys. also more serious bass too. assuming FL studio i'd use Fuity Filter on some stuff and Reeverb on the key channel =] keep it up though you may have a knack for this sorta thing ;]
Hmmmm... I never thought of putting some reverb. I'll keep that in mind next time. Thanks for reviewing.