Eh..

I didnt like it a whole lot, and I think the guitars were too .wav like. I don't mean to hate on you or anything, but the song could use some touching up so its recording material. Right now it feels like a "rough draft" piece, and I don't think it will go well until you fix the elec guitar sounds to sound smoother, and realistic. The synths were real confusing as well, so try to focus on particular rhythms. Anyway, nice try, and keep on trying to get better. You have the right idea.
-Spooner