The time is 4:20 XD Weed aside, this is an incredible song
This was sort of interesting, since in the beginning of the song I was not expecting a screamo song at all, but I associated it with like hawaii and stuff (I have no fucking idea why, but there was something with the feeling in the beginning). There was some intense energy in the song which was uplifting, so yeah, it was a good song!
I think you could probably make this better if you didn't scream and sung it instead, like where it says "I won't be there at all". It was still a pretty good song. Nice work. I think it's better than some stuff you can hear on the radio these days. Keep it up!
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Ruined by vocals.
The instrumentals are just fine and dandy, and then the singer comes in, starts shouting and stabs the song in the throat and commands his pet kitty to drink the blood.
In other words, this would be better as a fully instrumental piece.
Like I said to a previous person ... if you want to listen to a singing song, do check out our other track Patterns on Newgrounds.... other than that .... we have bunnies.... and we give them water. There names are Hunnie Bunny, Oreo, Koko, Charlie, Midnight, Chestnut and Bootsie. :3
I do believe this is Metal, not Screamo. But anyways, the song is very good, I felt the intro was a bit too long, but hey, it works for you :P. Can't wait to see more.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.