This is a pretty cool song. Not ambient though. More like, downbeat or trance.
I do like the piano(like the rest:P), i believe you worked quite hard on it. I like the melody of the song in general. Also the arp is quite catchy. I like that.
Things to consider changing:
Get a deeper bass. You know, a bass that really rocks the floor. Its quite weak.
You need a bit more "beat" to the song. Try turning up the drums a bit, maybe, add a funkier beat to it.
Get the bass melody more clear. This seems to be a common problem in most of your songs. A clearer bass, or a deep pad, that really shows the "BASS note" would help.
Hope i helped.
Nice Piano Line. the transitions that you used worked great. thanks for the reveiw on my stuff. i really like your style. i hope to aspire to make stuff like yours. maybe we can do a collab or something sometime.
hope to hear more of your stuff.
Piano with stabs... Cool!
The piano melody was really nice, and I thought the stab was a good way to introduce new parts of the song such as the bass and then that synth instrument. This is my type of music! I love piano ambient stuff like this with cool synths and pads. That's what my song I am about to release is all about.
I wasn't expecting something this nice for my "required 3 reviews" but this is pretty damn cool!
I love that piano melody, and when you introduced the drums and the bassline(which I loved, however needs a better way to lead back into the loop, also try and come up with cooler rhythms than just up-beat stabs, since it's been done to death) it started to flow together very nicely. I really like the little synthy bleeps toward the end with snare flams, it builds a nice energy for that next part. I really like the mood and feeling that this piece creates, it's a beautiful piece and I'm going to keep watching for more pieces by you.
Wow thanks! Im glad you appreciated this song. Zeeber too. yah I realize that coming up with greater diversity in my rythms is what I have to work on for my future songs so I will definetly do my best
it had a nice lead in. Once the piano started, i was like Woa! you know how to put notes together! Very good job on that. I too am not sure what to classify this as, its pretty close to ambient.
The only thing that i can possibly find wrong was that the song lacked some diversity. You tried, however, by adding to it. I give you credit for that, and it all flows very nicely. Once the song got a little more "trance-like" it helped it out a bit, even though diversity didn't change all too much.
However, overall i really liked this song, and i think you put a lot of effort into it. Good job with the piano!
Feel free to check out my music and reviews are always welcome. Good job and keep up the good work!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.