You got my 5, but not my 10. I wish there were parts where you picked up the song just a hair more. I also think the 2 second pause at :58 is too long, you should shorten it to about a half second pause, or maby a second long pause if you had a reverse cymbal or a drum-roll.
Thanks for the review. Yeah, I guess you're right about 0:58. I enjoy getting advise so I can improve my music, to become a better composer. Thanks again. :)