that was really good, keep up the good work
I like the vibe
The instrumentation reminds me a lot of Collapse Under The Empire (look it up on YouTube if you're interested). The chord progression is soothing and despite it all sounding pretty lo-fi, it's really nice.
I really like the guitar work. The drums leave a lot to be desired. If you must use electronically generated drums focus on the dynamics as much as the pattern (your patterns are good). For this type of music randomization of the individual drum hit velocity is vary important to make them sound more realistic. You might want to try chopping some analog loops and re-arranging them.