you need to work on your production.

This beat is just littered with stick sounds and under produced elements. The melodies you create are just a bit too random and the instruments just dont sound very good. Try adding some effects and having some consistancy with your instruments. Synths are great, but the one syou use just kinda sound like you turned some kobs and used whatever sound your synthe made. Keep trying.

No Votes?

Come on guys, you must have some thoughts!?

Well, I think it's good, but I still think you pick the wrong instruments.

Get ones that have echoes and stuff, and dynamic sound (i.e its never the same)

And, try and vary it more, if you're going to do a long piece.

Maybe change the tempo halfway through

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