Good

Too short

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
So this was a loop but it was still short, could use it as a sound/fx but seems like you coulod have done alot more with this maybe some sorta changing but i think you could stretch it somewhat more, more into a song or tune, and with the sounds you do have you could probably pull i off but you will need more variaty more differant {INDTRAMENTS} and even other sound/fx sounds and stuff like that , that will make it into something better, but anyways it is ok for the sound/fx alone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above needs more changing and improving stretch it into a song more variaty of instraments

mer vide 3 ?

will it be the final part of those horrible and cut sounds?

I bet...

I bet if you combined this one with your first one and extended them with new music, it would be great