I like the synths and piano but the drums are a bit plain. Try some reverb and delay and tape distortion or whatever. xD Because the drums sound very preset.
Not bad though, only short...
I think im gna mix up the drums abit, make it a little less "preset" :P and ye the reason y it is short is cause i intended it to be a loop. I made to be looped :) but thanx for ur input!