Very good but....
It's great with what you have right now but I think you should make this again with more alternating patterns.Some of the pros:Mellow beat,Put together well, and the adittion of different instruments when you go into the piece.
I understand where you're going with this but you've got to remember it's a background track for a cartoon; there's going to be dialogue and sound effects over this so it has to be kept pretty simple and easy to loop. It's just an ambient filler to help with the mood of the scene. But I do get you and I appreciate your trying to help. =) Remember to check out Special Delivery Episode 2 on August 16th!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.