Nicely put together
However it seems you are straining your vocal limits in some parts, If you ever redo this, try to tone it down a bit, you are a good singer though, so nice job =)
You mean tone down the vocals, or play in a lower key? I could see both of those as possible improvements, but honestly that actually is pretty comfortable in my vocal range, it's just...for some weird reason I sound strained. Thanks!
I like it! It's great. Good work!
Glad to hear you enjoyed it!