Better than the other one, IMO :D
It's a pretty good song, with a pretty good melody to boot.
It also sounds A LOT like the intro of Paradise on E by -API- though...
Sadly, I don't think there are anything that really stands out, perhaps you should add in some "wow" factor into it.
Great song! Keep composing :D
Thanks man i appreciate the review. And ill be composing more soon. Ill just get better and better with practice!
Thanks abunch! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.