has its ups and downs im afraid.
first off, for a trance loop it seems very long. 5:31 is way to long for a loop. i LOVED the instrument combination. for a trance/techno peice, i would expect it to start straight into the main beat but i felt it was a bit to instant. from 3:00 onwards, i liked your backing lead that was introduced slowly. not to slowly so that had a nice balance to the song. it seemed a bit to repetitive. this is possibly because of the length of the song and i like the ending. well structured! for a trainee sound engineer, i give you a 9!
-notes for next time-
-make the song slightly shorter to reduce 'dragging' effect.
-follow the same beatline that you started with but add small changes as the song progresses
-keep up the very creative work. i couldnt make something like this. the audio i make is dreadful :P
Made me feel happy in the face hole.
I aim to please XD