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Aug 8, 2010 | 11:18 PM EDT
File Info
2.4 MB
2 min 7 sec
4.13 / 5.00

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Rated 4.13 / 5 stars
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527 Plays | 48 Downloads
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Electronic - Ambient

Author Comments

Something I made out of boredom and lack of sleep.
Not perfect, but I wanted to get the idea down fast.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Awesome vocals, good basis for a great song.

I really enjoyed listening this. I think the vocals were outstanding, and the piano worked well with the bass, even though I think there could be a better alternative to the bass.

The only criticism I have for this piece is in regards to the lyrics. I'd develop them a bit more, especially if the vocals are taking the "front stage" in the song. Repetition would be fine if the vocals acted as an accent to the piece, but since they seem to be more of a focal point, I'd suggest adding more lyrical variation.

Aside from that, I don't have a problem with anything in this piece, since it seems to be a first-draft. It definitely needs development before it is finished, but I'm sure it will sound great in the end, however you choose to finish it.

Good work and good luck!

FluteJazz responds:

Thank you!My sister said the same about the vocals. It's what happens when I just make things up on the spot at 3am and don't know what I'm singing! :S
I'll have another look at it again and see if I can come up with some lyrics that are a bit more interesting. I'll look at the bass too and see if I can find a better sound on the computer somewhere!
I appreciate constructive reviews so much, because I desperately want to improve, so thank you again!