First attempt at industrial. This is the instrumental version; the lyric-infused, fully developed version will be out within a week or so. I really feel this is more of an Aggrotech song (at least, the final version will be), but NG doesn't have that option. =X
Spent the most time on this song out of any I've done so far, and it is, in my opinion, my best and longest work to date. Rates, comments, etc are nice. I need to work on my melodies. =S
Thanks,
TwilightShade
Grrrrrrrrrrinding
Aha, the title does seem fitting, since the track does sound like a lot of mechanical gears grinding haha.
Although I personally think that the kickdrum can be a bit more powerful, and that the melody can indeed be touched up on. And there are times when the track just feels really empty and thin, maybe it's lacking bass? :P
Otherwise, good job! Maybe with the vocals/lyrics, the track will feel less empty :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
TwilightShade 
