-Sorry if you want this compared to the original but i'm just doing this review strictly on the this track only.
-I actually like that this crosses the genre lines but it would of been better suited to put it in miscellaneous as to not put off those strict genre people. It's always nice to see something original since a lot of music that fits into guidelines seems generic in some way or another.
-Nice progression and build overall. You could of slowed this down and put more atmospheric melodies to contrast the electronic beats. Maybe even more shake of the sounds so they can reverberate to your ears. Just throwing some ideas out there.
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Alright, thanks! I agree i will move it to misc. Thanks for the suggestions, i will implement them and hopefully come out with a better revision.
Bit too trancy.
The tune doesn't really fit too well in the genre or the title of the song, but it's still a pretty good track.
Sure, it's an ambient song, but with a title like this, I didn't expect any sharp sounds, but the melody is quite sharp, and not very soothing. it wouldn't work very well as background music, and most ambient should work well as a supplement to waht I'm doing. So yeah, there's a bit too much... excitement :P
The sounds in the back, however, the dreamy-like sounds, really fit well in with the title. The main problem I have with this AMBIENT track is that it is too energetic.
Also, the ending is pretty bad, and far too sudden. Whereas the intro builds up to the track, the ending is just sudden and out of nowhere.
The techno sounds that came in at around 0.30 and just kept increasing also ruined the song quite a bit, both because they just repeat, and because this still is an ambient track.
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I stated that this didn't fit either techno, trance or ambiance, its like a mix of all. If i put it in either one of the catagories people will complain. Thanks for the review, i will try to fix the ending.
This would fit on a flash game perfectly!
Nice submission you uploaded and made. I loved the effects you put in this, it gave the song a mix of trance/ambiance, in my opinion. I also liked the way you played with the frequency of the whole song at some parts.
This song is so relaxing that I gotta say this would be fit perfectly on calmed flash games such as quizzes, crosswords and puzzles.
But, there's something that I didn't liked. When the song loops, it starts so different than when it was just about to end. You should had faded out the song at the end.
Conclusion: Nice song! I hope this gets in a popular game.
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I wish you would say what you didn't like and why you rated the tune a 4. It isn't a loop, i can try to make one but i think its absurd to rate a song less because it isn't a loop. Thankyou for your review nontheless xD. Have a wonderful day (or evening) Sir.
Just me again coming to review some more of your stuff
In my personal opinion I don't think you killed it at all.
Though it is hard to classify it as ambient, because like you said you do kinda tune it up a bit.
Nice work nonetheless man
Thanks man! I am surprised you found me scince none of my stuff is in the top 30! I am glad you like this tune! I just went bqk to the tune and i guess the reason this one sounds way different from the old version is because my feelings were differented when i made it, and the sound reflected that.
This song absolutely works without any kind of drum. I could imagine this song to be the background music of a exciting flash movie or something like this really good.
5/5 and 9/10
I also made some songs like this and it would be great if you could give me your opinion to some of them. Hope to hear from you soon!
Thankyou very much! I am thinking about expanding it and making it be like a soundscape. It will be a tune with a morphing theme and mood, but it will be longer and i will beg some admins and mods to let me upload something bigger then 8 mb. And sure i will go and look at your tunes!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.