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Aug 5, 2010 | 2:02 PM EDT
File Info
7.6 MB
4 min 9 sec
4.39 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 4.39 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

I personally think I did a pretty good job for just starting in this particular genre. This is nothing like darwin or lost soul, but just be sure to really listen to the whole thing : ) . Rate and review and you will be rewarded with 72 virgins! (dont worry their women)



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


I like it! You could change up the beat in the beginning though. Nice work!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Okay well..

Sorry for not reviewing you in like forever, haven't been on Newgrounds much at all, anyway... for the song...
From last time I heard you, you improved greatly, this is pretty good.
Not sure what to say for criticism, though one of the leads sound a bit distorted a bit, but not too much a problem for me.
Keep up the good work.

nameless11 responds:

thanks very much but im not sure if ill be doing alot of hardcore projects at the moment since im focusing on ambient, my specialty : P. But whatever i feel i will make, sometimes it just starts with a simple lead and I decide what sort of genre I want to make it into, just like how this song was made.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Needs a bit of work

One thing that got me was the saw(i'm assuming that was the foreground instrument) how you used it. It sounded like the timing was off a bit and some of the notes didn't sound like they fit in the key you happened to be using. Drumbeat needs a bit of work especially in your transitions.
However when you introduced the piano and finished the song out i was glad I really listened to the whole thing.

Lastly the baseline all but disappears in the section before the piano is introduced around 2:28 anyway fix all that up and i think you'll have something here.

nameless11 responds:

I agree wholeheartedly on the drum parts...but i find no problems with the foreground instrument, the timing suits the song and the melody to me sounds pretty good, the only small flaw with it was maybe the buildups.