WOWZERZ!!!
I like it! You could change up the beat in the beginning though. Nice work!
Author Comments
I personally think I did a pretty good job for just starting in this particular genre. This is nothing like darwin or lost soul, but just be sure to really listen to the whole thing : ) . Rate and review and you will be rewarded with 72 virgins! (dont worry their women)
Okay well..
Sorry for not reviewing you in like forever, haven't been on Newgrounds much at all, anyway... for the song...
From last time I heard you, you improved greatly, this is pretty good.
Not sure what to say for criticism, though one of the leads sound a bit distorted a bit, but not too much a problem for me.
Keep up the good work.
nameless11 responds:
thanks very much but im not sure if ill be doing alot of hardcore projects at the moment since im focusing on ambient, my specialty : P. But whatever i feel i will make, sometimes it just starts with a simple lead and I decide what sort of genre I want to make it into, just like how this song was made.
Needs a bit of work
One thing that got me was the saw(i'm assuming that was the foreground instrument) how you used it. It sounded like the timing was off a bit and some of the notes didn't sound like they fit in the key you happened to be using. Drumbeat needs a bit of work especially in your transitions.
However when you introduced the piano and finished the song out i was glad I really listened to the whole thing.
Lastly the baseline all but disappears in the section before the piano is introduced around 2:28 anyway fix all that up and i think you'll have something here.
nameless11 responds:
I agree wholeheartedly on the drum parts...but i find no problems with the foreground instrument, the timing suits the song and the melody to me sounds pretty good, the only small flaw with it was maybe the buildups.
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- Aug 5, 2010
- 2:02 PM EDT
- Genre
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- 7.6 MB
- 4 min 9 sec
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