turn the guitar up!
the most noticeable part of the track is the simple repetitive drum machine. I think you want to highlight your guitar playing since its really the defining presence here and it sounds pretty cool. I wanna able to hear it better!
A Good Setup
The overall song was pretty good, but I had to turn up my speakers to hear it clearly. You may want to amplify the final product about 35%. I can tell you sorta bs'ed it at the end. The beats you had in there where pretty ballin too. For some reason I can see this being in a Shrek montage. And I do give you props for making the different layers line up when you recorded this. That is one definate thing that stood out to me. But yes, I give you a 4 only because you made the ending a little too potent with sound effects. Good job all together.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.