hmm

don't worry, i helped a playa out with his scores..

well the song isn't boring,i liked how instruments changed.
but i might suggest focusing on the drum's rhythmic patterns a little more, and putting a compressor and an EQ on every instrument, so you don't have a clogged up sound.

also, there's a lack of high pitched sounds, you don't have to add a ton, just to balance the sound out a little.

still, i liked what was there, and i feel NG needs to step up on the commenting!
it's like they only want to comment on submissions that already have thousands of them!

well, i wish you luck and perseverance, good sir.