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I got tons better at making music. Thanks again!
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Hello Newgrounders!
Today I made this little one minute song with Fruity Loops Studio 8.
This is my first song with FL Studio, I am getting better.
Constructive criticism, please! Tell me how I could make it better :)
Good, but the voices AAAAAH THE VOICES!!!!
You had a nice rhythm and beats, but the voices in the middle ruined it a little for me. They were too loud and distracted me from the rest of the song, which was a shame since the rest of the song is nice. You should also aim for a longer song, since it's pretty short.
-Gyrocop
DJ-coocooletmoi responds:
Yeah, personally the voices are too loud and misplaced. The problem is, I don't have the files since I did this with the demo version of FL Studio which doesn't allow you to save any projects. Thanks for the constructive review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
gyrocop 
