I like the beginning. It has moved my thoughts and feelings for a good couple of minutes now and that is the aim. The constant bass drum at the end sucks. I wish you would develop this more. I personally would throw some drumNbass fiasco in it or some breakbeats so maybe don't do that. But still work on it and make it, I don't know, live up to all the buildup. Whatever you do, I hope it works out. Thanks for posting this I had a nice time listening to it for a bit.
It's got a mellow, ambient feel to it at the beginning. It starts to pick up and becomes more structured as the beat rises in and the piano sets itself up. That kind of progression makes it feel well paced. I'm unsure about that part where the bass drums starts repeating though, that felt a little too harsh considering how soft the rest the tune is. But it's a good song. 5/5
I really liked this. Very chilled out and spacious. Then you threw in some glitches and it got even better. The only thing I wasn't too keen on is the piano sound you were using it sounded a little soulless. Despite that it's refreshing to hear someone let a track breath and build like this.