this songs a very well done work in progress.
the only issue i have with it is how...... slowly it seems to warm up, due to the lack of any real... how would i say this, feel to it in the beginning?
turn it up a few notches, vary it up just a bit, to make it lead you in a little better.
i hope that helps at least a little. but, regardless, good work! and the title even matched the feel of the song! thumbs up.
The intro is the first thing on the list to change, and I agree completely. When you don't really know what you're doing, it's easier to re-use the same patterns over and over again because it's so time-consuming to get creative, but the ideas in my head will make it into the music as I learn more and get faster at organizing everything.
Thanks for the review!