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As I wrote in the description, this is like the main melody from my first attempt at trance... Its a little bit on the hardstyle side, but thats just how it turned out. I uploaded it to see what peoples opinions of it is. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated! Id like to make this better before finalizing it all.

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typeMARS

2010-07-31 09:47:12

okay.

too short!! no duh... it's a loop haha.

well... nice build, but next time, you need to remaster this, especially the leads. too loud! drums too. needs to be louder.

that's all.

Arcantium responds:

thanks mate, what exactly do you mean by "remaster" though?

SuperGoodSound

2010-07-30 22:22:08

needs some direction...

You may want to start out with few instruments, less delay and give them some space to "breath" and then slowly bring other tracks into the mix to prevent stuff stuff from feeling like it was mashed together.

You may want to check out tracks from a guy named zirconmusic who posts remixes here to get some ideas. A/B this with some of his songs to get an idea about the differences of how everything comes together.

Arcantium responds:

Thanks mate. Didnt realise that the description you enter when uploading doesnt actually show anywhere on this page. Its not the whole thing, just like, a chorus? I dont know how to put it. But thanks for your review! Especially the help with where to go from here.

MonkeyV

2010-07-30 21:16:28

hmm

Doesn't sound terrible.
My advice is to make it longer, and to have this part lead into a much quieter part with a similar melody.

Arcantium responds:

Thanks for the idea! Ill keep it in mind when I continue this track. Its only short because its incomplete. This is just the main melodic sequence from what I hope to make the middle of the track.