It sounds interesting
I think you are capable of more then this though, you should have a simple leadin, build mors stuff on, take a few instruments out, take a few new ones in to take their place, and then have an ending! Make some complete tune man!
:) its niceee
Haa you should respect your work more than saying "i knwo this sucks"
I find it nice to listen to and i love the layering you did. its a nice song. well done :)
Wow thanks. I really completely did not event try on this. But now that Its been like an hours since I listened to it I realizes the layering is pretty nice. Check out some of my other songs. And thanks for the review.