Good
It's not bad, but I like the original better. I like it's soft melodic touch but yours feels like it's stabbing my ears, It's good nonethless just not as good as the original. Yours definatly makes it sound different and unique, I'd like to hear some more from this game because I love the game. You should try doing any of these;
You're in ruins
Rag all night long
One Fine Day
Wanna Be Free!!
Purity of your smile
Can't go home again, baby
It really doesn't matter really those are just some of the ones I like, most of the stuff you do is really good so I don't care what songs you do.