To me it seemed very dry, like it was mostly lead synth and nothing in the background to give it a nice full sound.
The background beat seemed a little weak.
Dat intro synth,
it's pretty:3, the tone of it, I love it, it's not a default setting on anything right? What vsti did you use for it? Not very much drums in it, but the melodies and the whole things just really pretty and chill. There's a total lack of a low end too.
If it were my song I'd actually speed it up after the intro, maybe play that 1st part again but faster, and add some real fancy break beats in it. But that's me, and that's probably not what you're going for since you didn't take it that direction. It reminds me of a megaman x song ,or something snes, but slowed down.
I was mostly using Sytrus and Nexus, and I pitched the whole song down a bit.
Yeh, there aren't really drums on it as I didn't find them fitting and I like it more this way =]. I can see what you mean by slowed down, it is 140 bpm, maybe I could speed it up a little...
edit: I can't choose of 140bpm and 160bpm, maybe I'll just leave it like this :P
edit2: oh yes, the introsynth is gold saw from sytrus with a small mastering.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.