everything was pretty good but...
your singing could use some work man, at some points it's seems your getting so into it, your distorting the mic, then you seem really really bored at other parts.
im working on it, my singing i mean, its been the hardest part of this whole song. i see what you mean i need to do the singing more evenly.
my mic sux i have to distort it or it sounds like im on heroin :(
I thank you for your review i'll work on the vocals more :D