Dude you made it soud epic!
Can you please add a sub bass to go off every second beat, like booooom bup bup bup boooooom bup bupbup. (the boom bieng the sub bass) Also you could mabee put some kind oh reverse highhat leading into where you start the strings with an explosion or something when the strings start.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.