your song is kind of all over the palce. Its like in 3 different parts, the first part I like the drums (if you listen to my track rough edge you will see why lol). The second their isnt much to like and the third is the best. I think if you concentrate more on one aspect for each song your work will be better.
This Need A Lot Of Work
I'm sorry, but this song needs a lot of work. It's insanely repetitive, and there is nothing to it. It feels really empty, compressed and sloppy. I would imagine a twelve year old getting into music, that this would be there first computer generated song.
That came off really mean. I don't know how else to say it but, there is really nothing good to say about this song.
I think your trying to be something your not, worst mistake in music my friend.