Or however it's spelled. I was on P's page and saw a beatmaker responded to his blog. So, I decided to check you out. I've listened to everything you've posted so far. I like the vocal sample, although I'm not sure if it needed to be sped up (unless it was done to match the tempo of the music). I'm curious to know what it sounded like as a normal singing voice.
Also, the guitar is good. I like string in my instrumentals (Violin, guitar, cello, etc.). One problem I have with it is something I've noticed with all your submissions so far. It's just simply missing something. It repeats like you basically figured out 8 or even 16 bars and put it on repeat. The drum kicks seem a little low, but not a problem at all because it's easy to find the tempo with the guitar. So, if there was something that could be added (some trumpet blares here and there, a different instrument altogether through the instrumental), this would've been a 10 from me.
Nimbus The General
This is different
But nonetheless pretty cool. The drums are a little underwhelming, I felt. With some better EQing skills, this could be leveled out to sound pretty nice. I like the concept though.