Good work/Cool Style
You've got some great potential. Progression is good, percussion is well done, and the melody is just the right amount of repetitive to make interesting background music. However, I do feel like this track could use some more compression on the kick, but that's mixing/mastering related. Also, try some better percussion samples to improve your sound and composition quality. I recommend Vengeance Essential Club-Sounds as they seem to be widely used and loved.
All the best and keep up the good work,