since it s your first,
ill put this as nicely as i can:
the tempo changes constantly either going to slow or too fast
the main beat is too soft you can barely hear it
your instrument choice was... different.
but since it IS the song of storms, ill give you some points.
just try alittle harder next time
Thanks man, I have about zero experience with fruity loops, and figured I should atleast try something and put it up here. Thanks for not be an ass and actually helping me out man!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.