it's about time you posted something new XD
good job man. this is the start of something good. i'd like to see you do the whole thing now. keep it up man
You have a good piece to work with here, but you know what I think it needs? A nice baseline. For me, at least, a nice baseline brings the whole song together. You can go few ways here, since this is like a rave style song, you could go with a strong base hit on all the down beats. Just play around with it, you'll find something you like.
Overall, Great song you got here, just grow on it.
Makes Me Feel Like Im In the 90s
Great song its got a sorta 90s feel to it lol idky why but anyway great stuff. Make it a full song and check out my songs sometime.