You can't take our freedom

This needs a whole lot of work. First off I can barely here what you are saying it sounds like you are really far away. The beat that was playing was so loud over your voice I couldn't hear it even more. Then the beats in general sound like a 2 year old is hitting random notes. My suggestion to you is try to get a basic beat down. Also make it to where your voice can be heard. Better luck next time.

Let freedom ring!

This is what I went to war for! To fight for the freedoms of every man, woman, child in America.

The song itself is not good, but your message is spot on!