this is a lot better now! you can tell there is changes in the dynamics! and you add some new background music, i love the "guitar" part at the end, probably the marshmellow laughing at the end was good too.
i like it man but i would like to see the intro shortened but other than that it's good
:] yeah man but i think without it it sounds wubbish :]
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