Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Jul 21, 2010 | 10:47 AM EDT
File Info
1.3 MB
1 min 9 sec
0.70 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 0.70 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
546 Plays | 26 Downloads
Share Links:
Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

Guys try and feel the acid in your veins, If you do you will enjoy it (I hope). Please vote on it from what your heart truly believes this song should get. Please review it if you like or hate it. Please give me tips to make it better.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not very structured

My main problem with the song is that it's very messy.

Now, messy isn't always necessarily a bad thing, but right now it just doesn't sound like a song.

First off, I gotta say that it does, at times, remind me of underground Mario levels in the earlier games.

On to the song, well, it's nice that you want to try and use only acidic sounds, but it didn't work out very well for you here.

First off, it often goes off-beat. The minor rhythmic section you have seems to either outrun or be outrun of the main melody. Speaking of, the main melody doesn't seem to be structured at all. It rather seems like you just threw a lot of acidic sounds in there in different pitches. I don't really understand the very sudden transition to a higher-pitched acidic sound all of a sudden about in the middle of the song. That sounded really weird.

Lastly, the ending was really cheap, and very sudden. There were no build-ups or outros, which songs really should have. Work on these things, try to get a more structured song, and you might have a good acid songs. At least you have the right sounds.

Review Request Club

wrayn3 responds:

Well thanks for the Constructive critism. I was actually thinking of editing the song to make it better. Thanking you heaps

Wayne Rayner


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Mario Reference

Have you heard of that game super mario bros sunshine,This reminds me of when your underground.Anyways I like the song it just is pretty much the same thing.But you are smart and kept it around minute.But by the first second I started dancing.It was an ok submission.

Repetitive- -1

[Review Request Club]