I pretty much agree with floatingmagictree guy.
It is pretty generic. It's sort of like using a sine wave for everything (I know you don't, but this is just an example). Try and put some sprinkles on top of the cake, add some pizazz if you know what I mean. I know what kind of sound you're going for, but I just know you can make it better :)
Overall, it was... different!
Sorry to admit, most of your songs use sounds that are too generic, and it's just plain annoying to listen too.
okay, what's generic about them? i may not have been submitting audio for very long, but I know that this is pretty different from many other things on the site. but thanks for the critique.