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Marie's Song

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Author Comments

This is my first Audio Submission to Newgrounds.

I'm not really sure what genre of music this is, I guess Ambient/Easy Listening. Anyway, this is an original tune of mine i originally wrote for solo instrumental acoustic guitar but i decide to orchestrate it. I hope you dig it! Let me know what you think.



PRetty cool

Not bad. I brought it up to 4.07 for you. It was good. Nice and ambient. But the clicks and pops were kind of... distracting. But that can't be fixed easily so I didn't mark down for it.

1st Audio Submission to Newgrounds.../

Pretty awesome, I have to agree with oddo, you could add some more instruments, esp. after the 1:20 mark. Guitar would work great for the chorus.
Even just simple one-strum notes at the start of each bar.
I 'm noticing some clicks/pops every now and again, you might have to check that out. Could be the kick?
With some more variation on the drums you'll have a great demo here. Try to humanize the toms/kit fills a bit more. With a limited pallette you can always let the drums be more expresive. Use more than one cymbal for crashes/
Good song!

Hiberna responds:

Thank you! yeah i noticed the pops after uploading, i thought it was just my speakers. I'll keep all this in mind for future submissions.


I really enjoyed your piece. Loved the bit from around 2:12 until the end.
One thing I would say is that it sounded a little empty. For most of the song, it gave the impression that it was leading up to a big climax. You should put an acoustic guitar in the back playng some chords or something. Other than that, fantastic song!

Hiberna responds:

Thanks very much, constructive criticism noted.

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Credits & Info


4.23 / 5.00

Jul 19, 2010
8:33 PM EDT
File Info
6.2 MB
2 min 44 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.