Percussion could use some real work. The drums hit too deep. Also, you said in the description that this was supposed to be a loud and sinister song. I didnt really think of this as loud, but it was good on the sinister part.
Thanks for the feedback, this was my first time using orchestral percussion though I never took much time to compare this to actual orchestrated music, hence the awkward sound of the drums, gotta make more musical research for the next one...
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