XwaynecoltX Seemed too long
~~REVIEW~~
so like this was notbad at all, could have used more variaty and all, also it seemed abit on the long side of things so thats another thing you could fix on this just to make it much better, i did think it was just too long and needed abit of cutting down abit, just a thought for the next long one if you ever make more, Some differant sounds here and there and random moments would have been nice also, these are just a few ideas that could spruce this up to be better then before, but i did like it, so notbad work, better luck next time.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be improved on a number of things, not that it was bad or anything but could use some improvments like, make it shorter and also differant sounds in random places and times.
Cyberdevil 
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